It could have been worse.
Your drawings were decent enough initially, but sort of teetred near the end. The sound was not quite as clear as it could have been and the hurt considering the shortness of this animation. Unfortunately it seems like you wanted to make a flash, but didn't really have an idea and ended up with two cows farting and a talking sun.... However as I said this could have been worse and if nothing more proves you have potential.
well i am making better but this was well..
you know when your making a flash and its taking forever you need to get sumfing done as a break... well this whas my break
its not meant to be uber fantastical just a short thing i got bored n put togethere because flash was open.
Twas good.
It was decent, but it just didn't quite seem to work as a spoof. The graphics were well done, I couldn't complain about the audio so fundamentaly it was a good flash. However this was a spoof, so unless all the jokes work out and it is funny, it isn't especially interesting to watch. This would have been a lot better had it been your own individual work, entertainment wise, but I can see how you would want to make fun of Kindom Hearts. Just remember it is Disney, so you can't expect too much.
Tough it takes a long time before the most jokes start indeed, I don't agree being there too little jokes in.
Ten again, sme may be to cheesy, or badly inserted that you overlooked them, to many jokes might indeed rely on the " sora is stupid" factor, and you migt overlook visual jokes that for some are wacky and some watched to many cartoons to even notice, like with Sora cracking the coconut open with his head.
I also have pley of my own work, like the IMp series, tough oftne spoofs on other games give me a little bi more meat to chew on.
Glad you liked it in general tough.
Pretty funny.
This was a decent flash. I enjoyed it, the graphics and sound was decent and the content of the flash made it a reasonably enjoyable waste of time. Usually after watching a trailer I just feel annoyed and dissapointed with what I saw, but this I didn't mind.
okay, glad you liked it after all then ^^
Ok
This was simply a mediocre flash, but having watched as many homosexual flashes before this as I have, this looked, really REALLY good. The artwork was nice, your animation was crisp, even though there wasn't much movement it seemed natural at least. Sound was ok, worked well.
The only thing I can say is, if you are going to make it loop, then you should make the loop really seemless or else you should simply stop the animation and add a replay button.
Well, I'll see if I can edit the portal entry to add the STOP button and that replay button.
Nice man.
Perhaps with a little more practice you could draw better then a preschooler. Well I am going to seriously review this for some reason. Even though it is taking quite a bit of resistance to not leave an abusive review.
Graphics: I could draw better in ASCI then you.
Sound: Bah....
Animation: None... Are you using 12 FPS?
However I found this funny that this is now on the interweb and now every one can watch this "flash" and think wow my life could be worse, I could make flash this bad.
fuck off you stupid fag, your movies are nothing special either and youve had experience whereas ive had just two thirty day trials
Oh my.
First of all, you left a space of white around your background. Not only does this look tacky it also shows that you are an incompitent flash noob right from the get go. Second of all, CUT YOUR SPRITES OUT! Sweet jesus. Also sprites are no excuse to simply tween random shit across the page. Mix up the sprites so it looks like you know motion, instead of tweening the same gay thing around.
Don't submit anything else until you learn more about animating, this flash was an embaressment.
Yes I agree, Iwonder howgood your finished secound flash was on the fourth day of having it, and as I have already stated, I didn't the walking sprites for Wario and was a n))b or whatever at MS Paint and I said that I would redo it wiehter it was blammed or not. and why don't you send me some decent feedback so it isn't as much of an embaressment as you say it is.
Best Flash Ever.
What else is there to say about such an awesome flash. That song was godly. Completely hillarious fifen.
Happy Clock Day to you sir.
Thankyou.
Not really a Clockday flash.
Just proving that mass voting is wrong.
Awesome.
I love your work and I was wondering when another one was going to come out. This was a pretty cool one too. Graphics were good, animation was nice and I found it pretty fine.
Nice work.
I hated to keep everyone waiting, but I had to make sure it was something worth watching... Thanks a lot for the review bro!
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