Unimpressive.
I can tell that you tried, but this just wasn't very good. However it wasnt really that bad either which is what makes it so annoying. It is just decent, yet very very boring. I mean that music spelled snorefest. Also your text was mundane and what the fuck, notice I said fuck not f*ck was up with Ifrit.... I think you messed up a little when you cut him out. Well it deserves to pass, but I dont think anyone will be really satisfied after watching this.